Happyy:D
Oh damn good job benny!:D Sounds really great this far:)
I mean if you are going to add vocals!
But yeah this song has its own original sound:)
Really lighty and joyful:)! 10/10
Hey guys
This is my tune called "Don't Forget to Write". Thanks for clicking on my submission and listening, so here's some lyrics I wrote:
"Don't forget to write
Send the message as fast as ultraviolet light
Actually, upon second sight
Make it courier so it can arrive overnight
This is our only communication until we reunite
Colour with you is just black and white
So I sent you a song, just a sound bite
To rid you of any doubt, like stage fright
It might just be polite to recite outright
My delight despite seeming uptight
Hope you're sitting upright, I'll be forthright
Because wisdome only comes to those who are contrite
Bless you, and your interesting soul
And your calendar method of birth control
You repel me like positive from negative magnetic pole
So let this song bathe you, like one in the watering hole
Too much energy, might want to execute a barrel roll
Your north pole patrol is like a field goal on an atoll
So scroll your dole cursor down from the first verse or
Burse the nurse's hearse adverse as an inverse
So don't forget, OK!"
Thanks for listening and reading.
Benjamin
Happyy:D
Oh damn good job benny!:D Sounds really great this far:)
I mean if you are going to add vocals!
But yeah this song has its own original sound:)
Really lighty and joyful:)! 10/10
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.