Interesting "experiment"
i liked where the songs headed, sounds like you need to adjust a few settings on your instraments though, and smoothen transitions in a some places
i like the break at 1:33, I Can say to add a DEEP sub pass bass that comes in with that other sound at 1:15, a deep sub WHOOF sound in key with the other, would sound nice i think.
this song has the feeling of an A.D.D robot trying out new systems. Lol. thaat is all.
_-Mach 2-_