Good Stuff
Like the style and honest emotive nature of the song. If you haven't heard of them I reckon you should check out a band called Neutral Milk Hotel as your style reminds me of them a little. They have some great songs, I particularly like 'Song Against Sex' from their 'Avery Island album' check it out, they have a great way of using lofi and distorted acoustic instrumentation to make a really big sound.
Good stuff man.