Hey Audio Surfers,

This is a small section of a larger song that I am working on. I've uploaded it to get your thoughts and improvements. The main things I'm worried about are the volume levels (too loud) and the repeativness (which I have a problem with). So heres the story and please comment.

Thanks for listining
Satan Pown

The Story So Far: A warrior is given the chance to attack the savages that killed his family as a child, however this means leaving behind his wife. He is torn between the love of his life and avenging his familys death. Our hero chooses to avenge the death of his family and goes to war, leaving his wife to pray for him (this is represented by the piano). Eventually after a hard won battle out hero emerges, battered and bruised but alive.