Nice! But listen to Breed two below me - he knows what he's talking about. :P

great

Just love your songs.

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I have some subjective criticism for you. I think the "staccato" strings should be way louder at 24 seconds in and on. They supply the melody and its barely audible. Would raise tension too if they were louder. Some louder punchier vocals would help too. Percussion section was a bit thin. Some snare lines would fit great in here. Otherwise I'm thinking extra fills would be cool...theres not many of them; a crash here and there and a bell at the intro.

The good shtuff: Picardy third at the end sounds pretty interesting to me. The song fits a pretty cool cliche emotion/imagery that I haven't been able to emulate yet so I'm a bit jealous. Good use of suspensions in the slower section.

Love this type of music though, soooo 9/10 for what you got goin on.

Cheers!

OMG...

...i can't believe my ears(k,i can),this music,it's EPIC in all ways for such a short piece of music.
you've found a new fan...
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Perhaps it's because you're using Storm Drums IDK but it sounds very close to something he'd write. Which is good because he's an EPIC COMPOSER. Keep it up, you chose well with Storm Drums.
Also the strings remind me of Mafia II's menu music a bit. Which I quite like.
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