Heya! XD
ORIGINALITY: Very very original. Very well done. No criticisms.
CLARITY: Clearly intended to sound low quality. So I can't complain about that. I loved the gameboy mood that it created. Very inspiring. Maybe I'll write something like this one day.
DIVERSITY: It was a little short. I'd like to see you write more like this. Something longer, and more complete.
EFFORT: Sounds like it took a fair bit of effort to make it sound authentic.
OVERALL: I like it alot, but I'd really like to hear more.