Nice
I think you should keep working on this one mate, its got some potential.
as far as constructive critsism goes, maybe just making your bass a little less tinny and a little fatter and your intro is a little washed out sounding, I know you were going for that HPF effect but maybe bringing it up in a gentle curve before your track drops to even the volume and feeling out that little bit :)
Great work and finish it :D
4/5 8/10