Totally agree with these guys

Great sound but you really should try to change things up a bit more. I like to use the same instruments but just try a new beat or new riff and roll it as a verse and then head back to a chorus (which should be the best part of your song, I think). It helps to keep a listener hooked and wanting to hear what's going to happen next.

But your sound is pretty good beyond needed tweaking like everybody (mastering and such). But besides that pretty cool!

repetive >.<

but good start ^_^ i give you a 8/10

Moo...

Just add a little bit of diversity with another verse, something different from what you are using, but put it in the middle and come back to the original. the Beginning is really good and strong like I was gingerly ear raped, but then it sticks with the same ol' same ol'. And your ending was kinda weak.

I like your stuff, just want a little more to the song and a good ending.