Hrmhrmhrm.
You have a VERY nice voice, indeed. I like the music as well. I find this can get stuck in heads. Some improvements can get you far as well, man. (: Keep this up!
5/5
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My 3rd submission to Newgrounds. This is the 1st I've used singing in, which I admit is a bit rusty in my opinion, but I can't really change my voice much unfortunately. Hope you enjoy! Let me know what you think and remember to check out my other stuff :)
happycarrottop responds:
thanks alot :)
Nice voice!
Your voice is very nice, I don't know why you're down on yourself about that! You have great tone.
The lyrics were a little choppy, it sounded a little childish when you rhymed "mean" with "green". Don't be scared to break away from that little rhyming scheme.
My favorite lines?
"I've had enough of you, you mean nothing to me." It just sounded good. It flowed. It wasn't childish, and you made it really stick. If you wanted to, you could add in a second "nothing to me" to echo the first. "Nothing to me" (rest for 1 beat) and then "nothing to me" again. Listen to 1:24, that's the part I'm talking about.
I'm proud of the "solo" at the end as well, 2:47 is where it started. Nice tone. You have a very catchy beat!
If you fixed up a couple parts, I'd totally put this on my iPod, just saying.
Also, the last note falling makes me really happy. Nice touch!
happycarrottop responds:
thanks a lot! really appreciate the feedback. yeah lyrics were always my downfall tbh :P i'll take these notes into account and try to touch it up in a bit :)
:D Nice
Kinda sounds like brit alternative, but none the less, very nice song, and great voice
happycarrottop responds:
much appreciated :)
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