great work

even though like you said it was a little long in the begining it was good it felt like it built up suspence right in the begining to allow the rest of this to flow nicely. and if its not to much to ask do you think you could stop by my page and listen to some of my work. i am attemping something new and the feed back helps and anyhow i am looking forward to hearing more of your work

its prertty calming

i like it and wasnt tence anymore :p