Simply Beautiful
The beginning instantly hooked me (I agree with what silentjay22 had to say about it), and it got increasingly better...well, until the last part, that is. The strings and drums toward the end simply didn't sound as smooth as the other aspects of the song did.
All in all though, this was simply beautiful. It's amazing that someone of your age can make something like this, and I'm looking forward to listening to the full version.