Well...
It wasn't that bad. I mean, it has the basic elements for hardstyle but they all sound really unfinished. I just wrote a long review on another hardstyle submission where I told some basic tips for making a decent hardstyle kick, maybe check that out. ;P
As I said I'm not even reviewing the sound design/mixdown side since the elements need so much work (Well, just some basic EQ'ng/Compression), soo about the track itself: The melody was catchy in the intro and climax but too happy (Nothing bad in happy hardstyle, I just prefer more darker atmosphere). The track structure was typical for hardstyle, intro->mid intro->break->climax and so on.
I dont know, somehow I find hard time reviewing this one. :( Anyways, keep it up and be sure to check out my hardstyle submissions! :)