Perfect... Almost
All you needed was a pitch limiter on the master so the high noise wasn't so PEIRCEING.
Otherwise... 4/5 - 8/10
Nice stuff
Author Comments
o flower fawn
about to come out playing
in this flower water
out there
in the flower world
the patio of flowers
in the flower water
playing
flower fawn
about to come out playing
in this flower water
Beautiful.
Absolutely gorgeous song; well done!
Mathcore responds:
YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL
RELAX!
this song is very relaxing! :) i like it and good job!
That's space.....
...and relax, and floaty, and somehow New Age kinda thing...
But that's some good work; nice ambiant song indeed...
Great background, contributes well to the mood,
and nice poem; it relates good to the fluid and delicate feel of the song...
Two negative points:
-this high-pitched sound you use as a melody through the song is smoewhat annoying to my ears, due to its unstability, and disturbs the general feel of the song...
-it is not major, but you could use some bass to support the rest, as it sound just a little empty, but that could be my speakers that do not render fully...
4/5 8/10
Overall, good song and nice ambiance,
Keep up the good work
Chill out,
The Hobo Dude
Mathcore responds:
Keep your negativity for yourself, along with your pathetic 4's and 8's, my ears are still bleeding from listening to your garbage, and i get so frustrated thinking that someplace on this planet there is a guy who goes on the internet disguised as "The Hobo Dude" to underachieve and come with his "constructive critisism". Get real hobocunt, you either salute me or stroke cock in hell.
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