Love it

I live the drums in this there's just something the way you bring up and build it up with a nice vibe I think you need more focus on the drums and the unique sound at the start you could use more of that so with all that said this was really good work and keep up the great sounds

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More unique sound like you did at the start and more focus on them drums

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Amazing composition

Seriously enjoyed the beginning, so mysterious sounding. Then when the drum kicked in and all that reverb started up, I started thinking "This is amazing, what video can I use this on?" Thanks for finishing this piece!

Wow

This is quite impressive, all the sounds fit together in the intro to create this mysterious texture.
I have a couple suggestions: Add a phaser'd pad to some of the spots to fill in an empty sound.
Other than that, wow. this is seriously amazing. I love the drum samples used, they sound very crisp and clear, I can't think of anything else to really criticize!
Keep up the good work and inform me of more work you do! :)

SS

hey, man

you've gotten a lot better. right from the beginning, incredibly smooth atmosphere. everything works so well, even the light cymbal sections. the melody in the background that follows is great

then it picks up more around 00:45. the bass flow starts calmly in combination with the other elements. and it starts developing more. i like the dark, techno-ish feel to it. the strings that come along with the pad give it an airy feel. the percussion is immense. i love your snares, and that beat bangs hard even if it has that roller-esque impression.

i like the small melodies that come in, especially the piano (i think?) noise. overall, just flawless variation. you could still provide some small cuts in the drum break, maybe to make occasional small drops. or why not add in a huge one? some vocal samples or effects would be crazy, man. i think the only real advice i can give for this masterpiece is to give that bass more grime compared to a wavy noise that's generally somewhat static. i know there's some modulation here and there. it could require some more overdrive possibly?

GREAT FUCKING WORK!

Great track.

I would have to agree with CyberDevil. This track has a good balance of ambiance, impact, flow and the introduction leaves the listener wanting more. There is still potential for this track (As I imagine this is a Work in Progress). I would strongly recommend trying out phasing out from your current theme at 2:50 into something more organic. Get what I mean?

Organic in the sense, that KJ Sawka's dnb is organic. No, I'm not saying for you to go out and get a drumset :) Just saying, try incorporating more organic samples. The reason for this is that it would beautifully complement your track. You've given such a thick introduction that has fantastic build-up, and you don't wish to respond to it by underwhelming it in the long run. It feels that an equally adequate climax would be required in response to it (don't get me wrong, the track is great so far- I just feel it would improve by phasing from one orientation to another). It would give it a more liquid, flowing feel.

Hell, you could even switch themes over to dubstep later on and it would likely suit this track.

And don't worry man. Fuck the blammers- they're just mad trollin' because they're in their parents basement spanking to Hentai; no hope of getting a girl.