interesting.

I feel you could work a bit on volume control. The Celesta Bells (I guess I could call them that) at the beginning starts off too loud, and overpowers the other instruments.

Also if your going to use Sytrus' Techno elements, I advice maybe a flanger effect, it will give your pieces a strange and new feel. Maybe you'll like it.

The beginning also felt a little jumbled, like too much was happening at once, this can be fixed by either removing some notes, or spacing them out a bit more.

overall, pretty good though ^^.