lol it is good

it is good for a demo and i like it :)

Ehh...

1:10 and on needs something more. It sounds a bit like the beginning. You have this build up but it doesn't go anywhere and it kinda trails off at the end. When it builds up its almost as if it should be a big finish but it just drops off. You need something but I can't tell what.

I'll Tell you one thing...

It has great structure. This is sounds great and its only a demo version.I could listen to this all day. Keep up the great work!