Not quite there...
It was going so well until the higher guitar came in a fraction out of time and seemed to be catching up for the whole of the riff that it played. Towards the end of the track, you seemed to be getting the guitar out of time with the drums, which was a shame.
I'd certainly recommend that you get a piece that goes to the end here - you're not finishing it and I'd love to see how you interpret the high strings at the end of this, plus the drummer gets something to do, since the drums are pretty basic for what you've got here.
Keep working on it, I think there is definitely potential for this piece.
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