bopping
Starts off with a cool beat, but pretty much as soon as the 2nd, higher-pitched, drums layer comes in, it gets a sorta tropical-y sound.
The melody has a funky vibe, that I could see myself dancing and cracking coconuts to.
I don't much care for the instrument you use for that main melody. It sounds kinda too 'synthy' and the aural equivalent of 'blurry' if you follow my meaning.
Also, if you cut off 6s, it could actually loop fairly well. Seems like a missed opportunity.
At the end, with the descending, then re-ascending loop, it felt like an ideal point to launch another layer and melody. I suppose that might have made it too long for the Audio Portal though...
Lastly, I think there are a few points where playing with the 2 output channels could help make the tune more interesting. Specially the ending - that's a prime spot to try and get the 'spinning' melody to feel as if its rotating and spinning all around us...
Still, it's a kinda funky tune and had me bopping along. I just dislike the instruments you use.