John Stalvern waited. The lights above him blinked and sparked out of the air. There were demons in the base. He didn't see them, but had expected them now for years. His warnings to Cernel Joson were not listenend to and now it was too late. Far too late for now, anyway.
John was a space marine for fourteen years. When he was young he watched the spaceships and he said to dad "I want to be on the ships daddy."
Dad said "No! You will BE KILL BY DEMONS"
There was a time when he believed him. Then as he got oldered he stopped. But now in the space station base of the UAC he knew there were demons.
"This is Joson" the radio crackered. "You must fight the demons!"
So John gotted his palsma rifle and blew up the wall.
"HE GOING TO KILL US" said the demons
"I will shoot at him" said the cyberdemon and he fired the rocket missiles. John plasmaed at him and tried to blew him up. But then the ceiling fell and they were trapped and not able to kill.
"No! I must kill the demons" he shouted
The radio said "No, John. You are the demons"
And then John was a zombie.
(Some people don't realize this is a joke)
I liked it
The radio voice delivery made me laugh. You actually have something funny in the Comedy category, this is refreshing since I think many people have a hard time understanding that music doesn't belong in Voice Acting- Comedy. I look forward to your Sonic covers you plan on making.
vid?
wasn't there a vid with this voice act?
What?
I know I'm gonna be hated for this, but...
LOL, that was whack. You got a smile out of me, but not much more. I understand the comedy behind this, but it's a style of comedy that if isn't done perfectly, just isn't right. You're getting there, a bit more practice and I'll gladly give you a 10 the next time.
Very clear by the way, good mic.
Well I know there are a few area's to improve on, hopefully we are thinking of the same things.
Thanks for the review.
Holy bannana in A blender with a Coconut
This is top notch. Very Funny
Yeah
This is awesome lol. Loved the difference in characters with the radio and demons. Sound effects were a nice touch too.
It was fun to do, but I've already got some nice ideas for when I redo this for an animation. Thanks for the review!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Darkmaster603 
