Lol you used fl-studio to make this one

Every fl-user would hear that you used the standard drums set. The song is quite nice, but next time use own synth set-ups instead of presets.

worth bumpin

this is definitely a good beat, smooth transitions and great melody. i think it would be a bit better if you added 'more' in terms of high hat combinations but what more can you expect with an instrumental right? keep em' comin

i mean yeah like the idea!

i c what your goin for, nice use of reverb ( or may have been on the preset for the synth.. not sure) your drum pattern is ver of beat n different n i like it but id say there's maybe 1 or 2 drum kicks you could have left out and maybe play around with the high hats and the snares c if you can get some harder tones in there when it comes to percussion anyway! maybe play about wiv your compressors a bit also! other than that ! i like it ! tis very tribal trance! :D

Some ideas, but too flat.

Not bad, and ok for an ambient song, but we are waiting for explosions that finally never come.
Cause sometimes you create breaks, but finally, after those kind of transitions where the battery excites itself, there is nothing really powerful coming.
At 0:57, it was pretty cool, and the entry of the new instrument was well done at 1 :17, but after that you just came back to what you did in the very beginning, and it turned too repetitive.

You should try to superpose more than just one voice at a time. You did it, but it's not enough in my opinion, and it keeps being a little too light to create a real atmosphere. (i try to do it myself ;) )
A last thing : i think i recognize the drums of fruity loops... you'd better not keep them for your next composition ! :D

well

thats pretty nice song... I most like that 0-24 - 0-35 part 10/10 4/5