Such an awesome song, perfect instruments, great
I really love the instruments you used in this version compared to the first one. It seemed like you didn't re-use any effects or sounds from any of your previous songs like you did with the first version, which makes it sound far more original, and relaxing.
I love the ambience, and at the same time, the laid back happiness about the track. A very loopable like track for a videogame. So nice, so relaxing.
With all that said, I think you could even re-work it once more and improve off of it again. Such as having maybe an extra added ambience or instrument midway through so it doesn't sound quite as repetitive all the way through, and maybe a part or two midway/late in the song where there's a break that has some music playing aside from the chorus that's played throughout to maybe give it a deeper, or happier meaning.
All in all, one of your best tracks, look forward to hearing more of your great music.