Hm.
Well... It is good but! You need a bassline and a more louder kick. Also you need to master it. If you ever do get new kicks fix it up with EQ2 use the kick preset or adjust it your own way. Also to make it nice and loud use FL Compresser and blooddriver.(If you do use FL Studio... I suggest you do use it. It comes with amazing vst plugins). Also if you want to learn more about dance music of how it works. Youtube is the best way to go. =3 So 7/10 3/5. That is a good score. =p Just fix it up and it will probably be one of the best tracks ever. And DON'T forget about the bassline.