Hm.

Well... It is good but! You need a bassline and a more louder kick. Also you need to master it. If you ever do get new kicks fix it up with EQ2 use the kick preset or adjust it your own way. Also to make it nice and loud use FL Compresser and blooddriver.(If you do use FL Studio... I suggest you do use it. It comes with amazing vst plugins). Also if you want to learn more about dance music of how it works. Youtube is the best way to go. =3 So 7/10 3/5. That is a good score. =p Just fix it up and it will probably be one of the best tracks ever. And DON'T forget about the bassline.

OMG WHAT A BEAT

WHY THE HELL HAVE I NOT HEARD OF YOU BEFORE THIS IS AWSOME !!! GUY UNDER ME KNOWS NOTHING !!!!!!!!!!

okay dood

leads= too loud and too much.
drums= the kit had a overdriven sound too it.....its sounds like its peaking out. also the drums were to quiet

good song

Great song, but I think the other comments are right and would maybe sound a bnit better if you replaced the cymbals with a bass line.

Interesting progression, but still lacking in mix

The lead needs to be cut off, it's way too loose, I hear no kick, the cymbal is quite louder than the kick o_0 Strange. I personally cut the kick off at 40-55khz. Same with bass. Please compress the lead too, as well as the kick/snare/ w.e. This needs a lot of work imo, YOU REALLY need to look up a couple vids on mixing, it makes you music sound 100x times better. Nice melody though. Structure wise, it kinda drags on. Intro is the only listenable part imo :x Its all too noisy.