It has half of my name well sort of

This is a nice start.... but!

you know this is a loop and you need to spend more time on mastering it for sure dude but you also need to make more complex drum patterns and mabey a rly bassy kick or somthing to rly get it going.... and an intro that drops AFTER THIS IS DONE PRO STATUS

Decent

This definitely has potential, keep working at it!

A few things you might want to work at:

A little repetitive, change it up a bit
The drums are a bit weak, make them a bit stronger

Composition: 5/10
Originality: 7/10
Equalization: 4/10

Final score: 6/10