Decent tune
Hmm i must admit this is pretty good i like how you have some soft and hard tones in there but i also love how it doesnt just stay straight forward but you give it some good change here and there, making mix up differnt sounds thats a reall good thing, and i think thats a guitar sounds very good love the deep sounds you get from it very nice indeed. So how to make this better? keep doing what you got and keep with the deep guitar feel and so on, so anyways great tune i enjoyed it.
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I think this is just as it sounds doesnt need any changes
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