Nice
The panning is well done, and the different variation of the lead then go back to the original with a different bass sound worked well. Tell me though, are the first 6 notes a Bbmaj7 going D, F, A, Bb, A, F... I'm curious cause I'm trying to work on my ear.
J'Stanio
P.S. can't wait to hear the final copy, try to contact me when you are done.