Transition @ 0:45 sounded cool.

Added Melody @ 1:09 Sweet.

Breakdown @ 1:30 Wicked!

Rest and Build @ 1:36-2:08 Was cool.

Final-ly @ 2:09 Emotionally Touching - Sweet Sound.

Final-ly Touches @ 2:30 Adding to the emotional fulfillment - Sweet to the ears.

Ending @ 2:52 Smooth.

Overall, you did swell job man!