I think this song actually sounds good. But whenever I say that everyone else rates whatever song it is down. So please rate and write reviews about what you like and dislike. Oh yeah and enjoy it too.
Similar to a song I know.
Change your sounds.. The main lead should be more prominent and sound a bit more dirty, or even more bassy. Add some blips and bloops in the background. But make them coincide with the main lead, or better yet, a counter melody. Also, make your hi-hat's more... t t t-t-t t t instead of tsh tsh tsh-tsh-tsh tsh tsh. Overall, a bit rough, but not bad.
Thanks for the review. It is just a short version but I will be adding in some beeps and bloops and now that you mention it I will make it more bassy and sharpen up the sound of the hi hat.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
KyeMarchio 
