You said it

I think you said it, it's your first take, it shows, but it isn't at all bad. I feel the dubstep elements were short lived, and when they hit, they weren't as solid as they could have been. The good part is, you did an interesting turn around. I was listening and thinking 'this isn't no darn dubstep' then you flipped it and did a good job of not sounding like two songs just thrown together. Keep it up.

Other thoughts; pay attention to your LFO sound, make sure it has a sense of pitch. You got the LFO part right, but the bass itself didn't really have enough pitch presence. I know some dubstep does this, so this may just be personal preference.

First?

My first wasn't even this good. :S SHIT DAMN.

damn

I was waiting for the drop and the intro threw me off, then it hit. This is what most people would call filthy as fuck haha. I think the clashes in the beginning were a bit overwhelming (just loud), but other than that that was pretty good for your first song!
Just keep building on after, I assume this was just an intro? But keep it up man, sounds good.

-Too Tall

Woah. O_o

I'm not a dubstep expert. I dunno what makes good dubstep and what makes dubstep, and I don't really even have a clue what dubstep is supposed to sound like.

But that was awesome. And really trippy. Good stuff man. :D

If you wouldn't mind, come check out our music dude! We don't make the same kinda music, but you make some cool stuff. We're like your opinion on our stuff.

-Autumn Collapse

NICE

what u make this on?