Holy crap

This track is clipping like an insane barber. That kick is RIDICULOUS. Throw some soft clippers and limiters in there man! During your filter sweeps, the low frequencies ate everything.

Also the leads could be a bit louder. You've got some crazy melodies, but they're being devoured by that monstrous percussion

But i'd be lying if I said I wasn't jamming the hell out :D If you get the mastering/mixing right, keep that kick as loud as it is, and manage to boost the rest of the sounds without it clipping, this track could be amazing. Well done, my good man.

Honestly

This is exactly the sound I'm looking for in my faster techno, I think this deserves mastering. Please :)?

And this one will need to stick...

Great scales and hard core bounce dance beat stuff. I love it. :)

Of course, mastering is needed, but I ain't gonna rial on what ain't. Rather on what is! And what is rocks!

~Sir_Furious

Dude...

this is really amazing!
A little bit on the fast side, but still amazing!
I don't get why you think you suck, because you obviously DO NOT.

You really need to believe in yourself.

.......

its always interesting when a musician such as yourself say that they "suck" when theyre obviously better then half of the people here on ng
yes there are problems with this song but at least it sounds as good as it does and at least you realize that there is problems others are either ignorant to the problems or are like me and just dont know how to fix those problems due to being a beginner