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Thats pretty nice song man :) but you should lower your voice level and turn up those beats and stuff :)
9/10 and 4/5 from me :)
Btw I dont listen to hip hop but I know good music, look at these shit peoples on newgrounds like... POKEMON COVER ?! What the f*k man... This song is sell able but shits in top 25 ? Nobody will buy that sh*ts... Keep it up and you´ll be famous one day