Better...

I must say, your music is really starting to develop. However, there's still the issue of length. You must not know how to use the piano roll, right? With the piano roll in Fruity Loops, you can make your songs much longer. After you import an instrument to a channel, right-click on the instrument button(it's big and has the name of the instrument on it, you can't miss it) and select "Piano roll." Then you can just put in the notes(it works VERY similar to a musical staff) and make a song! You'll be making better, longer music!

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