I'm sorry, but WHAT THE HELL?

I'm usually not a low voter, in fact, this is probably the lowest rating I've ever given to a submition.

But there IS a reason why I'm giving this such a low score, and that is that this is pretty aweful.

First of all, this song is nowhere anything NEAR classical music, or even neo-orchestral film music stuff you hear today. THIS IS POP MUSIC, AND NOTHING ELSE!
The only "orchestral" elements that could possibly exist in this song would be the "flute", if you could even call it that, and the things that try to look like strings.

The chord progression is pop, and even then, it fails to even BE a progression, because of the occasional drum breaks in the middle breaking the structure.

The flute barely manages to play the tonics, OVER AND OVER AGAIN, and still manages to do occasional off key "harmonisation".

The drums are saddeningly bad, alternating between random fills and aweful accompaniment. THE ACCENTS GO ON THE 2's AND 4's, NOT THE 1's AND 3's!

The string are probaly the only part on wich I'll accord points. I like the harmonisation you chose, and the occasional tensions reated by keeping the previous chord's notes were pretty tasty, though occasional tensions didn't
fit.

I'm sorry if this critic seems hard, but being under the classical category, and having 22 votes and a score of 4.54, I feel like I had to judge your song as hard as a regular classical composition.

Please don't take this personaly, I just hope you'll get a lesson from this and take a bit of time understanding what you did wrong.

Cheers,
Samuel Hébert

P.S. PM me if you need any more detailing on improvable parts in your song.