I see potential...
..but I don't hear it.
This could've been so much better had an arp not been used and if the synths were a little harder, scratch that, a LOT harder. At 3:45, the bass dropping in pitch gave you the perfect window to go hard-style, but you didn't take it, and that makes me sad :(
I don't wanna be harsh, so I am voting 7/10.
Next time, definitely use more hard synths, and less lowpass, and you will be seeing 10's after 10's
Good luck next time