Darkness mixed with fear, I LIKE IT

Good job, the drop is sexy! I felt the darkness at the beginning and you topped it off with the argh reinforcing that fear/darkness present in the track! Nice job.

Tips:
1) Turn up your snares or add another snare ontop with a slight reverb, its gotta have more of a snap to it, well it doesn't have to, but it could work nicely :)
2) ALSO WHAT IS THAT MELODY AT THE END??? Man, you gotta do something with that! If not send it my way and i'll turn it into something! :P
3) Bit of reverb on the instrument at the beginning but add it as the track progresses so its very subtle, would add more depth to the track
4) Vary up the beat a little more at the first drop, so its 1 1 then beat 2 beat 3 or something, just a bit of variety so llike instead of 1 kick then snare have 2 kicks then snare

Hope the advice above helps a bit ^^