Not a bad first attempt.

Better than mine ^_^.

Okay, where to start, make sure you're going at 140BPM, stay away from your usual 8BIT sounds, it gets a little clustered at the beginning. Also, try to make sure none of your sounds distort (When the snare hits usually for you) I like the merger from 8BIT to dubstep, however your drop was nothing. You need a heavy sound for the first hit. I can give you tutorials, etc if you want via MSN. I would love to give you a helping hand. However, please have some presets ;).

Ok for a first :)

I was anticipating the drop to be more electro-ish, like skrillex. the build up sounded pretty good, could use a little tweaking. but ya, i would say to work on the drop more.
Keep it up, experience is key, thats what ive learned.

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