Hmm.

I mean, it sounds alright. But so boring. I mean Idk, I guess it had a touch of emotions in it. But it was still a little off.

I think a very soft kick, and soft snare/hit hat would do the trick......
I think it would sound wonderful and emotional then.

1:35 reverbkick- Kick clap kick clap kick clap with a hi hat in there.