This is just an experiment. This is the first time I ever try to play the guitar myself. I plan on advancing and making this song better through the weekend and until Thursday when I go to Britain :)
Edit: scratch that. I will probably not touch this piece, or any other for that matter, until i get back.from back.from britain. Loads of things to.do in preparation. Leaving for reykjavik tomorrow . Btw . Sorry for bad spelling .using phone
Pretty cool for your first try!
Keep it up! Has a dark sort of feel to it. I think it is funny how differently we approach rhythms using percussion. During one minute in I would have written a completely different part. I have to agree with Kira, I think either adding strings or a build-up with distorted guitar at one minute would sound awesome! Other than that, sounds pretty good! Keep practicing at guitar!
Takes thought...
I like the build-up, but it would have been cooler to have something more distorted in place of what sounds like an xylophone about a minute in. It could use a crescendo in the acoustic guitar as well before the xylophone comes in. It's a great start, and I see it becoming pretty awesome. 3/5 6/10
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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