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original composer Yasunori Mitsuda
original singer Joanne Hogg
covered by Megurine Luka (Crypton Future Media)
remixed by XenoCross
song is from an RPG called Xenosaga by Namco and Monolith Soft
original song can be heard here:
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=mkPdDvhOEaE
http://www.animelyrics.co m/game/xenosaga/thewordsi feel.htm
I've been watching you awhile
Since you walked into my life
Monday morning, when first I heard you speak to me
I was too shy to let you know
Much too scared to let my feelings show
But you shielded me and that was the beginning
Now at last we can talk
In another way
And though I try, I love you,
Is just so hard to say
If I only could be strong
And say the words I feel
My bleeding heart begins to race
When I turn to see your face
I remember that sweet dream
Which you told to me
I wanted just to be with you
So we could make the dream come true
And you smiled at me and that was the beginning
Now at last we can talk
In another way
And though I try, I love you,
Is just so hard to say
If I only could be strong
And say the words I feel
Tell me what you're thinking of
Tell me if you love me not
I have so much I long to ask you
But now the chance has gone
When your picture fades each day
In my heart the memory stays
Though we rant, you're always smiling
And I will hold it long
Singing was done using Vocaloid software (singing synthesizer developed by Yamaha). Thanks for listening!
(Thanks to whoever gave me a 5/5 XD)
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I thought it was very catchy! I never watched the show, but I liked the song very much! Great job!
Bad to say
The voice hid behind the music at points, which is horrible.
From a Xenosaga fan standing, this song sounded like you snatched up a midi, and re- in instrumented it.
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The whole thing needs major equalizing. The intrumentals and vocals ESPECIALLY.
This song feels like it wants to break into a full dance beat with your synths.
You should study up on transistions and equalization, they both require changing.
Thanks, I really appreciate your advice. I am still trying to get better at mixing/mastering. I mixed this with headphones earlier (I know bad idea) but I updated the song after mixing with my studio monitors (noone is home alright!). Hopefully it won't sound as bad as before. And no, this was not a midi rip. I am a piano arranger and I wouldn't dare do that. Links to the original is included for anyone else who is interested in hearing the original. :D
I'll keep doing my best to improve.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.