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Usually do instrumentals, but I've done one or two freestyles in the past and ay if you guys like it I'll start making some more :P


Much love to Garlagan for this sick beat, his jam -.-2oo9-.-


Let me know what you think in the comments. Sorry if my energy was kinda low, it's pretty late and I can't get too loud cus everybody's asleep :P Lyrics Below;


I got a chrome backdrop to my lyrics of the future
A sticky note stuck to the disses like that you're a
Fat sack of weed with no tricomes in all the
Messes of leaves and sticky ickee yeah I called ya,
Out. Man, what you so scared about.
That I'm gon take your girl for a ride, Yeah I'm gon make her shout,
Groan, moan, down up in my chromosomes
There's a poet in these fuckin veins
There's pot all in my fuckin brain
My thoughts ain't clearly organized
Yeah thoughts of flyin into skies
And breakin through blue barrier
To deep space I'll carry her
See the diamonds in the stars
As I hop from bar to bar
Drinkin' all my sorrows down
Feels like a fuckin' proving ground.
Who am I tryin to prove myself ta.
I mean really nothin' stops ya.
From flyin high like a plane, where reality's altered
Cus' once you've seen the big city can't go back to country tunes
Yeah these big town riffs got me lookin' like a buffoon.
Too soon, its night
Out come fangs, take a bite
White on white, light no light
With that skin like din-din
And blood like gravy man I'll eat and chop up all these fuckers like a butcher with the cutters hedge-clippers, man I'm so damn jipper, I'm a motherfuckin' monster and you gonna need some wolf bane cut up all ya family for breakfast like CEREAL killa main...got milk? Haahaha...nah that's fucked up
Ts ts, say baby girl whats your name
You like Spanish speakin
Porque yo lo tengo en mi mente
No se que a decirte
Solo que eres una bellesita
si me dejas no te suelte
Te gusta ese reggaeton?
Pues, back to English yeah I fuckin own
All of you fuckers, don't talk to me bout lovers
Cus I've got like twenty thousand more than jasper dolphin and another...bitch on my nutsack
Key West freestyle that shit was fuckin whack, hahaha
Unicorn taco with some fuckin awesome hot sauce
Now available at mtvma's like rick ross
8 piece nine piece brand new Mercedes, and it ain't no lease

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Decent...

Props to Geordie with the sick beat. The freestyle had parts that flowed, but then the pauses kill it. The recording quality is garbage, sounds like both vocals and instrumental were recorded in one track. If you separate em, or just record vocals, and place em with the beat, you'll get a lot better quality. You got a decent voice for rapping, but the low energy and dragged flow don't do you justice. Keep em droppin Acoustatic

If this was a freestlye then did you write out the lyrics after you recorded the freestyle? Or is this a freewrite?

Acoustatic responds:

Hey thanks for the feedback man, much appreciated.
Yeaah my energy was really low, it was pretty late and everyone in the house was asleep so i had to stay quiet :P
Really true about the recording quality, im working with a laptop mic right now. By Christmas im getting an actual, decent quality mic and that's when shit's gonna get real haha.
It was a freewrite actually, wrote it during class in a few minutes and recorded it way later in the day.
Expect more in the future, peace

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Aug 30, 2011
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2 min 51 sec

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