not too shabby
Pretty good for one of your starting pieces. This sounds like FL to me... so I'll give advice based on that. Some of the sounds are a little off when they hit their high points. I would tune the notes with the tempo knob until they sounded right. And you should consider getting a wav editor to remove interference, like the ticks at the beginning of the sounds that start at the very beginning and continue throughout the song. Keep it up, I think you could become really good. Just remember to use filters and unique samples to create a signature sound!