Well written, dude. Your voice ain't half bad, and your lyrics are corny yet beautiful :) The riffs are really nice too, and your refusal to adhere to any time signature. The verses remind me of Bob Dylan for some reason, too. And that camp feeling of the song Michael Cera and Ellen Page sing on Juno. It's really nice and homely :)
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A song I made for my girl awhile back. It's the only song I've made for someone special and tbh I think it's one of the greatest things I've ever written, besides the fact that some of the lyrics are corny as shit hahaha.
If I could edit the lyrics this is what theyd be:
I see you and you see me
This is like a prophesy
Imagine a place where it's just us
In a place where you can trust
Nevermind the world cause this is glee
Nothing else around just you and me
Holly, I know how you feel
I don't doubt you
Holly, just know this is real
This song about you
Now I know
The life of me shows
My heart will grow
When I'm around you
Baby I'm so glad I found you
Those eyes and that smile
I hope you and me can last awhile
In this world, this fucked up world
I'm happy to know I've found a girl like
Holly, I know how you feel
I don't doubt you
Holly, just know this is real
This song about you
Now I know
The life of me shows
My heart will grow
When I'm around you
Baby I'm so glad I found you
Great
Good work dude, Keep it up. 10 stars
Very sweet.
I like these kind of songs, they sound very genuine with emotion.
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