It's not much loopy you just need to add more effects to it, it seems well structured, nice work :D
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I only ask for people to review this so I know how my work is quality wise.
Now as for a description: This is me exploring with more functionality of FL studio, trying to get the hang of it. So if you would please review it so I can learn whether or not I am doing decent or not REVIEW IT FFS ITS ALL I ASK!!!!!
Also no stupid reviews, only post them if you plan on helping me improve my work, useless reviews will be removed.
Also I need help naming it.
ferret854 responds:
Thanks, I dont release something to others if even I cant listen to it. I try to make something sound good and see who else likes it.
Also: All my music is free to use without crediting me, I believe in free media and my way of showing it is by keeping a good free-use policy.
Repetitive, but keep at it!
I think if you want to improve on this, try mixing it up a bit more. Add some key changes or rhythm changes, and make the phrases a bit more distinct.
ferret854 responds:
Thanks, although techno is usually semi-repetitive, this does overboard it. Main thing I was going for was the different sounds same notes, Just fiddling with the dials on the sytrus modulation. But yes I agree I am weak in rhythm composition. Listen to my other work and tell me If I've improved much.
Also... Thanks for being supportive, It really improved my opinion of Newgrounds as a whole to see at least one person give productive feedback to assist in the composing process. PM me back ill give you the Midi file I saved it as because I have FL studio demo pretty much.
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