Another great track!

Very compelling! Definitely has an RPG feel. I would personally cut out 1:25 to 1:36, I think that would help it flow better. That way the son doesn't change TOO much from the original melody. Also, I think from 0:54 to 1:25 you should either change the key or the bass to fit what the lead part is playing, or change the key of the lead part to fit what the bass is playing. Just some helpful advice! Good luck on your game!

Not bad.

I really liked the part with the piano melody and the short bassline. It reminded me of Simcity 2000, so good job on that!

I only have one negative point for your song. Some parts didn't feel like they were mean't to be there, you know what I mean? Maybe you should continue the melodies from the intro and build up the song from there.

Other than that, this song has potential! Keep working at it.

Can you please review back on my first submission? I would appreciate your feedback.

~ Luxomni