I've decided to return to NG after an extensively long period of not posting any music on the internet. I have here a simple techno song. Let me know what you think, eh?
Lyrics:
You've gotta trace the line
Before you're out of time (X2)
A schism in my thoughts (X4)
3! 4!
You've gotta trace the line
Before you're out of time (X2)
A schism in my thoughts
A schism trapped within me
I do not know what to do
I don't know what to do
You've gotta trace the line
Before you're out of time (X4)
You've gotta trace the line
Great Song!
I'm not saying this because he's a good friend, but a good musician at that. The lyrics do seem out of time just a little bit, but we've got to trace the line... If we want to draw Pokemon from the how to draw books we all had in first grade. We all had those books, and you know it.
Nice song.
This is defiantly something that I will have stuck in my head tomorrow! Great job, nice work!
Pretty good melody
My only advice would be to work on your timing with the singing, its not bad and maybe cut down on the autotune a little bit and try a vocador instead, but thats just me, keep it up man, good stuff
Thanks man. I just started incorporating vocals into my electronic stuff. When I go to do a final version, I'll definitely take your suggestions into consideration. I'm also still trying to get over the hesitation of recording vocals, haha.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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