close, but not close enough!

mas volume, por favor!
louder! pump it up, bro guy! you can do better! i like the beginning. with an intro like that, you have so much more to offer for the main riff. make those drums louder, introduce a better bass, with a few more synths. dont underestimate the usage of velocity changes. velocity changes more than you think. you can also introduce a lot more synths. alright, well nice job over all with chord progression and musical idea, but so far youve just gotta make it a bit more hard hitting, then it will sound super boss!