Woah, bass.
Hey man, thanks for the review you dropped me.
I like the beginining bass riff, its full of, well, bass! Awesome.But I think it sounds a little bit unorganized? Maybe it might be nice to make the notes shorter when you have them playing one after another (i.e. and F after an F, make the first one shorter so that it doesn't 'blend').
I like the little arp you have going on. Very organized sounding! The drum work you have is also very nice, but to cover up that its an FL preset, have other drum hats from non-FL producers going, with those a little bit quieter. They kind of cause unnessecary noise, like it blends some things out.
I like the big sappy lead you bring in, but its too 'out there' when it starts out. Maybe it would be nice to have a little delayed and reverbed clav pattern going while it filters in with an 8 bar drum break at the same time?
Just to make it sound alittle more professional sounding.
Overall, good song! But try not to use FL presets so much :)
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