I like the melody.

Very much so, actually. I hope you made that synth, cause it sounds so...ringy and perfect sounding for this kind of atmosphere.

When you brought in the bass synth, I thought it was very appropriate. Made the song seem very glitchy and violent...but eerie.

I think it would have been awesome though, that with the first melody and with the bass synth you already had, it would have been awesome if you just brought in a standard trance beat with a basic bassline.
Just to make it feel all groovy, instead of unstable.

I don't really like the chaotic part in the song. It takes away the unstable acid feeling, and added a random osunding feeling, which i feel kind of ruined the song, I'm sorry to say.

Maybe instead of bringing in those drums, maybe you could have some organized drumNbass drums going with the trance beat you alreayd had going on, so that you can have the dirty and fast feel with the song you have.

Good track, but needs a bit of improvement :)

Sweet job!

PS: Do you think you could do me a favor? I'm new to the AP and it'd be nice if you could drop me a review. I've only got one song, but there will soon be more :)
Thanks!