hmmm

towards the end it becomes more powerful, but the major transitions seem disjointed and their melodies don't seem to support each other. Some sounds seem a bit superfluous in contrast to the strong presence of the percussion. i would suggest shortening the song a little and taking out some parts, giving it less weight to carry so that the transitions become more fluid and impactful. otherwise the harmonies are good and you can tell there's an underlying progression that just needs to be unearthed.