Sweet

One of my favourites my parents used to make me listen to on the long car rides when I was a kid. Although I think it was a different version of the song. It's great though....so retro.

I loved the original

This is equally as awesome. I saw the title in the listings and thought to myself "could it be?"
Anyway, great job. I can't really think of any improvement needing areas.
Cheers,
Jack

stylish)

You made song in true style. It is impossible to find mistakes here) But to a pity there is no originality. Thats the reason of 8 instead of 10

Needs Drums!

Could use some actual drums, you know, the sweeping 60's style, but on an actual drumset. And a bit of a bassline, but nothing too heavy.

backing vocals?

It needs some lol.