not bad

I particularly liked the beginning rhythm. This was a pretty good start at the ambient post-apocalyptic sound. You could definitely clean things up though. The begninning guitar lead could have been more interesting. I found the whole thing rather simple and predictable but certain lines stood out as interesting to me here and there. The second part could have also transition better, even if it was after a collage of ambient sounds. I think if you added in more ambient hums and sounds in particular places it may add more of that spacey feel and add some unpredictability to the lines in a controlled and intelligent manner this could be a very good piece. I felt a hint of diablo tristram town at 2:05. If that is one of your inspirations, you could learn a lot from that piece. Keep making music and I'll look further to your improvements in the future.